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Marina's avatar

I like the symbolism of the cactus.

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Kim K Gray's avatar

Thanks, Marina! The cactus itself was the prompt I started with and the story evolved from there!

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Miya Ashra's avatar

This post reminds me of my grandfather's garden. He has tons of red palm tree seeds and all us grandchildren play with the seeds, but then my sister burst it open and made her very itchy to touch it. So my grandmother asked to chop down the palm tree.

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Kim K Gray's avatar

Oh goodness! I didn’t know red palm did that!

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Miya Ashra's avatar

Yes, I am not sure if palm tree seeds in other countries do that though!

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Thalia Toha's avatar

Kim- I like the way you put ‘It all began to crumble.” Hope you’re well this week? Cheers, -Thalia

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Kim K Gray's avatar

Thanks for sharing what you liked about my little story, Thalia!

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